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Perfect People by =twilite-crescent:icontwilite-crescent:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Do you ever think about the perfect people?
What they look like,
Where they are?
Everyone here is so intent on perfection
But how can they know what perfect is?
I've never seen a perfect person
And I know
You can't look me in the eye
And honestly tell me that you know what perfect is
The perfect people must be invisible
Or far away from here
Because they've escaped my notice
These people you aspire to be
But I want to know why, my love
Why, tonight, can't you be happy with me?
Must you always assume
That I see you in this dark light you cast on yourself?
My dear
You're perfect to me
More perfect than the perfect people
That everyone's aspiring to be
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Author's Comments

*sigh*
Sheesh, it feels good to say this
To finally write a poem again
It seems like it's been ages
Ah well.
This is dedicated to a specific someone, if that specific someone ever reads this, they'll know. Either because they always assume everythings about them, or because they actually remember what I've said to them :P either way, whatever works.

This was written in a notebook that *lostindeath101 got me for christmas last year. It's the first thing I've written in it, besides some strange sketch of a womans face on the very first page.
Love the cover, though.
It says "Adult Supervision Required"
:XD:
Thanks again for that, Cadie. Much love.

And much love to the special someone. ;) You're perfect just how you are.

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~crimsonmoon13 Jun 21, 2008, 7:55:31 PM
*dies*
Twi you're so freakin' talented! I love this.
I really like the line about perfect people being invisible.

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~AthenaNekoAstraea Jun 21, 2008, 10:17:48 PM
I think I know who this special person is... At least I assume it's that... person. o.o *goes off to fave the work*

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=meeden Jun 22, 2008, 3:04:15 AM
it's as if one truly believes - feels like a sad song beginning... :butterfly: well done!
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=twilite-crescent Jun 22, 2008, 1:41:47 PM
=^_^= Thanks Crimson!
It means quite alot to me, you know :hug:

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=twilite-crescent Jun 22, 2008, 1:47:06 PM
lol, well who do you think it is? hmmmm?
Aww, and thank you for the fave! :glomp:

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=twilite-crescent Jun 22, 2008, 7:31:43 PM
=^_^=
Thank you very much!
Your words are always so kind, I truly appreciate it! :hug:

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~crimsonmoon13 Jun 22, 2008, 8:13:47 PM
but of course!
I'm glad that it does :glomp:

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I'm not short... I'm fun sized!!!!
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"you know your in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams" -Dr. Seuss
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=Many-Of-Me Jun 23, 2008, 10:51:18 PM
Sorry, I Have No Words For This Just... :heart:

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=twilite-crescent Jul 1, 2008, 4:09:27 PM
=^_^=
awwww!
:hug:
Thank you!

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