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She watched the light leave her own eyes
But she can’t remember why it did
Or when it really left

She watched her heart wax cold
And she learned that trust was best placed in herself
And herself alone

She listened to her words lose emotion
Though she wasn’t sure why she stopped feeling
But it felt right

She felt herself grow distant from the world
But she still wishes she could go back
Though she’s afraid

She’s heard them talk about her
The woman made of stone
The Ice Queen

She’s felt their fear when she approaches
The instant distrust and hate
But she’s grown used to it now

She writes her words on the window
And tries to recall the girl she was
But that girl is distant to her

She watched the light leave her own eyes
And she’s become a hardened woman
But she craves a change
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something of a first part to a "two-part poem"

"second part"-->[link]

Thanks for viewing!!! :rose:

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:iconlostindeath101:
Beautiful! Fabulous! Love it almost as much as the second bit.

(And yay for first comment! ^_^)

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:icontwilite-crescent:
tehehe, thankies sista!

(:w00t!: for first comment indeed!)

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:iconcityonahill:
ohhh i like very much :)

:+fav:

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"...Neither can a city on a hill be hidden."

"but all i get to do
is fake a smile til bed,
roll over,
and cry myself to sleep"
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:icontwilite-crescent:
*squee*

THANKS SO MUCH!

:glomp:

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:icontaliionis:
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
:icontwilite-crescent:
:glomp: Thankies soooo much Mitchy!

:smooch: you rock!

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:iconthecreecher:
...*somewhat speechless*... (wow)

A poet is a painter with words for a pallet. You my dear sister, are a poet.

:heart:
:icontwilite-crescent:
:blushes:
thankies

That means alot to me, especially coming from you
:hug:
Thanks, sis

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