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Between your lips
Is a needle
Filled with morphine
Or novacaine...
And it is sharp
Like a double edged sword
It stings with venom
Soothes with soft tones
Hold it tight
It might slip away

Between your lips
Your tongue

And it is vile

Vile to me
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enjoy this little diddy that came to me

the people that can point out one or more of the references to sayings get cookies! ^_^

please comment, your words are so very appreciated

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:iconnekosnowangle367:
love your poem!
1st comment!!!!!!!!!

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o.o Oh thats really interesting.. Not sure what to say more than that though.
:iconlahtiirah:
um... sharp sarcasm? someone who lies but always seems to be able to talk you back to them? that's all I can think of right now...

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Many thanks!

:w00t!: for first comment! ^_^

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:icontwilite-crescent:
well interesting is good!

^_^ Many thanks, and thanks for the fave!

:blowkiss:

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:icontwilite-crescent:
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Yus!

lol, and what a strange thing for me to quote

*gives you three cookies for being the first to find a reference*

Danke schun for reading, fruend! ^_^

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"Danger! Bad MoFo in da house!" -~AthenaNekoAstraea
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:icontwilite-crescent:
definitely sarcasm

and I never thought of it as a liar...

but it definitely fits!

Two cookies for you!

*gives you two cookies*

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"Danger! Bad MoFo in da house!" -~AthenaNekoAstraea
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:iconlahtiirah:
yay! cookies!

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Run with the White Wolf
By reading this, you just lost the game :B
I'm Aquilamon in dA's Digimon Crew.

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