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Between your lips
Is a needle
Filled with morphine
Or novacaine...
And it is sharp
Like a double edged sword
It stings with venom
Soothes with soft tones
Hold it tight
It might slip away

Between your lips
Your tongue

And it is vile

Vile to me
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enjoy this little diddy that came to me

the people that can point out one or more of the references to sayings get cookies! ^_^

please comment, your words are so very appreciated

:heart::blowkiss::heart:
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love your poem!
1st comment!!!!!!!!!

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Redo*
o.o Oh thats really interesting.. Not sure what to say more than that though.
um... sharp sarcasm? someone who lies but always seems to be able to talk you back to them? that's all I can think of right now...

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Run with the White Wolf
By reading this, you just lost the game :B
I'm Aquilamon in dA's Digimon Crew.
:blowkiss:
Many thanks!

:w00t!: for first comment! ^_^

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"Danger! Bad MoFo in da house!" -~AthenaNekoAstraea

...the closing years of life are like the end of a masquerade...all the masks finally come off...
well interesting is good!

^_^ Many thanks, and thanks for the fave!

:blowkiss:

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"Danger! Bad MoFo in da house!" -~AthenaNekoAstraea

...the closing years of life are like the end of a masquerade...all the masks finally come off...
:nod:
Yus!

lol, and what a strange thing for me to quote

*gives you three cookies for being the first to find a reference*

Danke schun for reading, fruend! ^_^

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"Danger! Bad MoFo in da house!" -~AthenaNekoAstraea

...the closing years of life are like the end of a masquerade...all the masks finally come off...
definitely sarcasm

and I never thought of it as a liar...

but it definitely fits!

Two cookies for you!

*gives you two cookies*

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"Danger! Bad MoFo in da house!" -~AthenaNekoAstraea

...the closing years of life are like the end of a masquerade...all the masks finally come off...
yay! cookies!

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Run with the White Wolf
By reading this, you just lost the game :B
I'm Aquilamon in dA's Digimon Crew.

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